Thursday, 20 December 2012
Wednesday, 19 December 2012
Storyboard Movie
After we had created a script, shot list and storyboard for each individual scene in our production, we created a storyboard movie for the whole film, this is to give an idea of what our finish product will look like and to show/ give an example of a range of different camera angles that we intend to use in our production.
Tuesday, 18 December 2012
Thursday, 6 December 2012
Production Logo
As our film is a drama with a target of 'pulling on your heartstrings' we have named our production company 'heartstrings productions.'
I have done this by using my knowledge and skills i have using photoshop. I have taken a worn paper effect and taken down the opacity to create the vintage look. I then added our company name in simple caps so the image is easily readable and added a bevel and emboss to form the shadow on the texts as though it has been hand calved.
This is the final product and i am very pleased i have achieved the look i was aiming for!
Tuesday, 4 December 2012
Example of Time Passing Sequence
Our film contains a time passing sequence which shows the two characters Molly and Alfie falling in love and the development of their relationship. This is a common occurrence in Romance films as it creates an image of a strong close relationship between two characters before the climax of the film. Here i am looking at the time passing sequence in the film Beastly which is a Romantic Drama.
This is where Lindy and Kyle first meet, the scene shows Kyle hiding beneath his hood which tells the audience he is shy and insecure. Music is playing in the backgroung very quietly.
This is the first time Kyle and Lindy go on a date and he takes her to a rose garden. The volume of the music increases and the dialog stops.
The film then cuts to the couple reading poetry in the same rose garden but we see a time difference as the roses are no longer blooming and there is snow outside on the ground. This tells the audience the couple have been seeing each other from the end of summer through to winter giving the audience an image of their long term relationship.
This medium shot shows what the couple are looking at. This is the scene where the couple break in to a zoo together and watch a film. This creates excitement for the viewer as well as the dim light making the scene feel romantic.
This is the final scene in the sequence which shows Lindy asleep on Kyle which tells the audience she trusts him and their relationship is close. As the sun rises in the scene the music becomes quieter to signify the ending of the relationship.
In romantic films the time passing sequences build up a false sense of security with an audience before something happens to tear the couple apart. We have used this structure in our film. We also used a similar technique to Beastly by using the same location, by the lake, but showing the couple first in big winter coats in dark cold weather first meeting and then later with t shirts on hugging in the sun to show the audience how much their relationship has advanced.
This is where Lindy and Kyle first meet, the scene shows Kyle hiding beneath his hood which tells the audience he is shy and insecure. Music is playing in the backgroung very quietly.
This is the first time Kyle and Lindy go on a date and he takes her to a rose garden. The volume of the music increases and the dialog stops.
The film then cuts to the couple reading poetry in the same rose garden but we see a time difference as the roses are no longer blooming and there is snow outside on the ground. This tells the audience the couple have been seeing each other from the end of summer through to winter giving the audience an image of their long term relationship.
This medium shot shows what the couple are looking at. This is the scene where the couple break in to a zoo together and watch a film. This creates excitement for the viewer as well as the dim light making the scene feel romantic.
This is the final scene in the sequence which shows Lindy asleep on Kyle which tells the audience she trusts him and their relationship is close. As the sun rises in the scene the music becomes quieter to signify the ending of the relationship.
In romantic films the time passing sequences build up a false sense of security with an audience before something happens to tear the couple apart. We have used this structure in our film. We also used a similar technique to Beastly by using the same location, by the lake, but showing the couple first in big winter coats in dark cold weather first meeting and then later with t shirts on hugging in the sun to show the audience how much their relationship has advanced.
Example of Time Passing Sequence
In order to show a range of shots of Molly and Alfie together, we liked the idea of using a time passing sequence as a way of showing the couple spending time together as there relationship grows and as they fall in love. From researching into a range of romantic time passing sequences, we liked the idea of using a clip from the film UP, despite this film being animated it gives an example of a range of camera angles and shots used to show the couple as a pair. In this particular film the female protagonist character Ellie is diagnosed at the hospital, then as time goes by, passes away. Similar to our production this film shows the pain the male progtagonist character Carl goes through when the one he loves is taken from him. From watching this scene, I have selected a range of shots that show the couple together and then apart.
Shot 1 - Shot of the couple in the church as they get married and are about to spend the rest of there life together.
Shot 2 - This Close up shows couple as they make there new home personal by writing both there names on the letter box, this shot gives an example of the couple doing something simple yet makes them happy.
Shot 3 - This shows the couple as they have a romantic date together in the park.
Shot 4 - Shot of the couple as they sit at home holiding hands which expresses there love for one another.
Shot 5 - Shot of the couple as they hang a picture up of the house which both of them would love to live.
Shot 6 - Shot of the couple as they are now old and have grown this way with one another.
Shot 7 - Ellie is laid in the hospital bad, as Carl kisses her forehead, this shows that Ellie is now ill and the couple will no longer be together forever
Shot 8 - Lone shot of Carl as he sits at Ellies funeral, he is now alone due to the one who he loves passing away.
This particular film is useful to show the couples relationship as it uses a range of simple to shots to empahsies the couple spending time together as they grow old and empahasises how alone Carl is once Ellie, the one who he was meant to be with forever, dies.
Time passing sequence, before I selected a range of shots.
Shot 1 - Shot of the couple in the church as they get married and are about to spend the rest of there life together.Shot 2 - This Close up shows couple as they make there new home personal by writing both there names on the letter box, this shot gives an example of the couple doing something simple yet makes them happy.
Shot 3 - This shows the couple as they have a romantic date together in the park.
Shot 4 - Shot of the couple as they sit at home holiding hands which expresses there love for one another.
Shot 5 - Shot of the couple as they hang a picture up of the house which both of them would love to live.
Shot 6 - Shot of the couple as they are now old and have grown this way with one another.
Shot 7 - Ellie is laid in the hospital bad, as Carl kisses her forehead, this shows that Ellie is now ill and the couple will no longer be together forever
Shot 8 - Lone shot of Carl as he sits at Ellies funeral, he is now alone due to the one who he loves passing away.
This particular film is useful to show the couples relationship as it uses a range of simple to shots to empahsies the couple spending time together as they grow old and empahasises how alone Carl is once Ellie, the one who he was meant to be with forever, dies.
Time passing sequence, before I selected a range of shots.
Monday, 3 December 2012
Tricky Shots
Sunset Scene - The shots during the sunset scene will be difficult because of the light. When shooting in to light the character will be back lit.
also the rain scene might be difficult to film because of water getting on the lense. We experienced this during our first year film where rain drops obscured the view.
Saturday, 17 November 2012
Anatomy of a Costume - Mum
This is the costume Molly's mum wears throughout the film. As Molly's Mum is played by me a 17 year old it was vital the costume aged me. We decided to go for the dress on the left as it is smart a sophisticated and something a teenager wouldn't wear. The blazer chosen adds a work look to the dress to give the audience the idea she is a working mum.
To finish the costume off i chose to add my glasses to add an intellectual look to the outfit and also hide young looking eyes. The more of the face covered the less obvious of my age and the more believable the character becomes.
To finish the costume off i chose to add my glasses to add an intellectual look to the outfit and also hide young looking eyes. The more of the face covered the less obvious of my age and the more believable the character becomes.
Anatomy of a Costume - Alfie Smith
Throughout our production, Tea, Coffee and Cancer, it was important that the two protagonists, Alfie and Molly, wore the right specific clothing which would portray them as the young teenagers they play throughout the film. We found that finding the right clothing to reflect their teenage lifestyles was not a major issue for us as Luke and Sadie, who play Alfie and Molly, are roughly around the same age as the characters they play and already owned clothing which was suitable for the characters of Alfie and Molly.
Throughout the whole film, the character of Alfie wears blue denim jeans. This helped to show Alfie's laid back attitude and shows that he doesn't particularly care about his appearance and whether he looks fashionable or not. Although jeans are quite simple, the character of Alfie still manages to look decent but in an effortless way, considering he spends most of his money on drugs and alcohol.
The character of Alfie wears a range of different t-shirts throughout the film, including a casual grey polo shirt, again reflecting his laid back attitude and easy going nature and a grey jumper with a print on the front. He also wears a band shirt, reflecting the fact that he is a big fan of music as many teenagers are. However, in one of the time passing scenes with Molly, Alfie wears a shirt which shows that his relationship with her is having some impact on his life and changing him, as he is trying to dress slightly more smarter when he is with Molly.
Alfie also wears a grey beanie hat in several scenes, again showing that he is a care-free adolescent and also wears a green parka coat in several scenes, portraying him as a young, typical teenager.
Throughout the whole film, the character of Alfie wears blue denim jeans. This helped to show Alfie's laid back attitude and shows that he doesn't particularly care about his appearance and whether he looks fashionable or not. Although jeans are quite simple, the character of Alfie still manages to look decent but in an effortless way, considering he spends most of his money on drugs and alcohol.
The character of Alfie wears a range of different t-shirts throughout the film, including a casual grey polo shirt, again reflecting his laid back attitude and easy going nature and a grey jumper with a print on the front. He also wears a band shirt, reflecting the fact that he is a big fan of music as many teenagers are. However, in one of the time passing scenes with Molly, Alfie wears a shirt which shows that his relationship with her is having some impact on his life and changing him, as he is trying to dress slightly more smarter when he is with Molly.
Alfie also wears a grey beanie hat in several scenes, again showing that he is a care-free adolescent and also wears a green parka coat in several scenes, portraying him as a young, typical teenager.
Anatomy of a Costume - Molly
Molly Jones' costume's throughout the production of Tea, Coffee and Cancer reflects her young age and her young lifestyle. She wears simple, fashionable outfits that many young girls around the age of 18/19 would wear and therefore she represents the stereotypical teenage girl that many audiences can relate to.

In order to portray to the audience what the characters in our production are like, clothing became a critical part of how we wanted the characters to be seen. In many of the scenes of our production Molly wears neutral colours such as pinks and creams that generate a girly image and show Molly as a fashionable character, who likes to wear pretty clothing. For example the outfits we selected are all simple pieces yet Molly is still seen to be wearing nice clothes that many girls around her age would wear and would appeal to.
In Molly's death scenes we liked the idea of putting Molly in pyjamas as this shows she hasn't got the effort to get dressed or change her clothes due to her chemotherapy treatment not working and her feeling ill. Molly wears cute pyjama bottoms that reflect her young age and show she still is a young girl despite her illness making her deal with problems adults have to go through.

In order to portray to the audience what the characters in our production are like, clothing became a critical part of how we wanted the characters to be seen. In many of the scenes of our production Molly wears neutral colours such as pinks and creams that generate a girly image and show Molly as a fashionable character, who likes to wear pretty clothing. For example the outfits we selected are all simple pieces yet Molly is still seen to be wearing nice clothes that many girls around her age would wear and would appeal to.
In Molly's death scenes we liked the idea of putting Molly in pyjamas as this shows she hasn't got the effort to get dressed or change her clothes due to her chemotherapy treatment not working and her feeling ill. Molly wears cute pyjama bottoms that reflect her young age and show she still is a young girl despite her illness making her deal with problems adults have to go through.Friday, 16 November 2012
Thursday, 15 November 2012
Location Photos
Location pictures of the Kitchen in Molly's house where Scene 2 takes place, this is the first scene in which we learn about Molly's illness, her cancer and where we first see the effect this has on Molly's family.


Location pictures of the lake in which most of the film revolves around, many scenes take place here as it is where Molly and Alfie meet for the first time and where they come to spend there dates. We used this as a location as the scenery looks picturesque and romantic for the couple.


Location pictures of the car, in which Molly's mum drives Molly to the hospital for her chemotherapy treatment.
Location pictures of Molly's Bedroom where Molly's suicide takes place and where the film ends.
Location pictures of Alfie's kitchen and dining area where we firstly see Alfie arriving home from the cafe and texting Molly. We are instantly able to notice the empty bottles of alcohol on the kitchen side, expressing the rebellious character that is Alfie himself.
We then see Alfie's dining area again
towards the end of the film when he
finds the letter in Molly's bag explaining
she has terminal cancer and where he commits suicide.


Location pictures of the lake in which most of the film revolves around, many scenes take place here as it is where Molly and Alfie meet for the first time and where they come to spend there dates. We used this as a location as the scenery looks picturesque and romantic for the couple.


Location pictures of the car, in which Molly's mum drives Molly to the hospital for her chemotherapy treatment.
Location pictures of Molly's Bedroom where Molly's suicide takes place and where the film ends.
Location pictures of Alfie's kitchen and dining area where we firstly see Alfie arriving home from the cafe and texting Molly. We are instantly able to notice the empty bottles of alcohol on the kitchen side, expressing the rebellious character that is Alfie himself.
We then see Alfie's dining area againtowards the end of the film when he
finds the letter in Molly's bag explaining
she has terminal cancer and where he commits suicide.
Wednesday, 14 November 2012
Location List
Molly's House
Tea Room
Alfie's House
Lake
Woodland
A quiet road
Vantage point
- Molly and Mum in the kitchen
- Molly's overdose
Tea Room
- Molly and Alfie Meet
Alfie's House
- Alfie texts Molly
- Alfie finds chemotherapy letter
- Alfie's death
Lake
- First Date and start of time passing sequence
Woodland
- Laughing and playing around, falling in leaves
A quiet road
- Thrill seeking walking down the middle of a road
Vantage point
- The Sunrise where the characters say I Love You.
Monday, 12 November 2012
Tea, Coffee and Cancer - Character Profile - Dr. Shamilla Patel
Name: Dr. Shamilla PatelAge: 27
Date of Birth: 30th May 1985
Although only on screen for one scene, her character of Dr Patel is important nevertheless. Dr Patel has been a graduated medical student for 4 years and after losing her brother to cancer she made the decision to specialize in chemotherapy. She treats Molly politely and reassuringly on screen and also writes the letter to Molly off screen.
Role: Dr Patel plays the doctor who Molly, the main protagonist, sees when she goes for her check up. Although Dr Patel acts reassuringly towards Molly, she is the one who has to be the 'bearer of bad news' and tell Molly that her cancer is terminal.
Purpose: To be one of the characters that expresses the theme of drama. On screen, Dr Patel acts friendly and polite towards Molly. However by writing the letter to Molly telling her her cancer is terminal, the theme of drama is then highly emphasised with the character of Dr Patel.
Tea, Coffee and Cancer - Character Profile - Sharon Jones (Molly's mum)

Name: Sharon Jones
Age: 46
Date of Birth: 21st December 1966
Sharon is mother to 18 year old Molly, 15 year old Lucy and 11 year old Ben. She loves her children dearly and just wants the best for them. She is constantly encouraging Molly to get out as much as she can and telling her that her illness must not stop her from behaving like any other ordinary teenager, but this doesn't mean that Sharon still doesn't worry about Molly. Because of Molly's illness, Sharon also finds that she cannot concentrate fully on her job and ends up handing in her notice in order to give Molly the constant care and attention she needs. Throughout Molly's battle with her illness, Sharon sometimes feels like she isn't giving her other children enough time and attention due to constantly looking after Molly. She finds it difficult to cope sometimes but does her very best to stay strong for Molly.
Role: Sharon plays the main protagonist's (Molly) mum and is the person who Molly goes to when in need of advice or support. Sharon does her best to comfort Molly when she is upset because of her cancer and does her best to cheer her up when she's feeling down.
Purpose: To be one of the characters that expresses the theme of drama. Sharon tries to reassure Molly that she will get better and acts as a loving parent. However when Molly commits suicide, Sharon is truly devastated and heartbroken, and this side to her highlights the genre of drama in our production
Sharon is mother to 18 year old Molly, 15 year old Lucy and 11 year old Ben. She loves her children dearly and just wants the best for them. She is constantly encouraging Molly to get out as much as she can and telling her that her illness must not stop her from behaving like any other ordinary teenager, but this doesn't mean that Sharon still doesn't worry about Molly. Because of Molly's illness, Sharon also finds that she cannot concentrate fully on her job and ends up handing in her notice in order to give Molly the constant care and attention she needs. Throughout Molly's battle with her illness, Sharon sometimes feels like she isn't giving her other children enough time and attention due to constantly looking after Molly. She finds it difficult to cope sometimes but does her very best to stay strong for Molly.
Role: Sharon plays the main protagonist's (Molly) mum and is the person who Molly goes to when in need of advice or support. Sharon does her best to comfort Molly when she is upset because of her cancer and does her best to cheer her up when she's feeling down.
Purpose: To be one of the characters that expresses the theme of drama. Sharon tries to reassure Molly that she will get better and acts as a loving parent. However when Molly commits suicide, Sharon is truly devastated and heartbroken, and this side to her highlights the genre of drama in our production
Tea, Coffee and Cancer - Character Profile - Alfie Smith
Name: Alfie SmithAge: 19
Date of Birth: 11th March 1993
Alfie is a young, care free, confident individual who has quite a bad reputation. He is a 'bad boy' and has been kicked out of his home due to his constant drinking and drug abuse. He has no job and no particular aspirations in life and thrives off the feeling of being 'alive' and having a good time. Due to his irresponsible actions, people who know him often only have bad things to say about him. However when he meets Molly, he is instantly attracted to her and overwhelmed by her kindness and believes he can change for the better in an attempt to be good enough for her.
Role: Alfie is one of the main protagonists in our production. His relationship with Molly is the main storyline in our production but his excessive drinking and drug abuse is also what the story focuses on. At the beginning of the story, he is seen as the bad guy and the one who everyone hates but as the story progresses, his relationship with Molly is seen as a good thing for both of them.
Purpose: To be one of the characters in the production that expresses the genre of romantic drama, his relationship with Molly expresses the theme of romance, yet at the same time his abuse of drugs and alcohol expresses the theme of drama as it is considered to be reality and a real life situation.
Tea, Coffee and Cancer - Character Profile - Molly Jones
Age: 18
Date of Birth: 7th November 1993
Despite suffering from leukaemia, Molly is an optimistic, bright, young girl, who refuses to give up fighting her cancer. Working as a waitress in her local cafe, Molly likes to look at her life in a positive light despite her problems and her job allows her to meet and communicate with people who treat her normally. Molly enjoys her job more than most people and begins to enjoy it even more when she meets Alfie, and her relationship with him becomes a way for her to escape the reality that is her battle with cancer.
Role: Molly is one of the main protagonists in this production. Her relationship with Alfie is the main storyline but when her illness comes to light, this also becomes what the story focuses on.
Purpose: To be one of the characters that expresses the genre of romantic drama, her relationship with Alfie expresses the theme of romance, yet her illness expresses the theme of drama as it is considered to be reality.
Sunday, 11 November 2012
Shot List - Scene 10 - Final Scene (Molly's House)
- Establishing shot of Molly's mum as she enters the house, with her hands full of shopping bags.
- Camera zooms in as she leaves the bags in the hallway and heads up the stairs.
- High angle shot from the top of the stairs as Molly's mum walks up - (dialogue exchanged) "Molly, get up its half 11 you lazy bugger! I've got pizza for lunch, thought we could watch a film together, thought it might cheer you up love."
- Long shot of Molly's mum as she enters Molly's bedroom and walks over to the bed.
- Medium shot of Molly's mum as she sits on the side of the bed, pulls Molly's earphones out and begins to tickle her chin. Molly doesn't stir.
- Medium close up of Molly's mum as she shakes Molly a little, with still no reaction, Molly's mums eyes are drawn to the empty pill box on the floor.
- Close up on empty pill box.
- Close up on Molly's mum as she frantically shakes Molly, tears begin to roll down her face as she cradles her daughter - (dialogue exchanged) "Molly! Molly! Wake up! Molly! Come on! You're fine, I know you are! Come on Molly!
- Medium close up as Molly's mum lays Molly back down on the bed and falls on top of her sobbing - (dialogue exchanged) "Molly, no. Please......"
Camera fades out of a long shot of Molly's mum sobbing onto her daughter.
- Camera zooms in as she leaves the bags in the hallway and heads up the stairs.
- High angle shot from the top of the stairs as Molly's mum walks up - (dialogue exchanged) "Molly, get up its half 11 you lazy bugger! I've got pizza for lunch, thought we could watch a film together, thought it might cheer you up love."
- Long shot of Molly's mum as she enters Molly's bedroom and walks over to the bed.
- Medium shot of Molly's mum as she sits on the side of the bed, pulls Molly's earphones out and begins to tickle her chin. Molly doesn't stir.
- Medium close up of Molly's mum as she shakes Molly a little, with still no reaction, Molly's mums eyes are drawn to the empty pill box on the floor.
- Close up on empty pill box.
- Close up on Molly's mum as she frantically shakes Molly, tears begin to roll down her face as she cradles her daughter - (dialogue exchanged) "Molly! Molly! Wake up! Molly! Come on! You're fine, I know you are! Come on Molly!
- Medium close up as Molly's mum lays Molly back down on the bed and falls on top of her sobbing - (dialogue exchanged) "Molly, no. Please......"
Camera fades out of a long shot of Molly's mum sobbing onto her daughter.
Script - Scene 10 - Final Scene (Molly's House)
Molly's mum enters the house and puts the shopping on the floor in the hall way. She takes off her shoes and coat and walks upstairs.
Mum
Molly, get up, it's half eleven you lazy buggar!
I've got us pizza for lunch, thought we could watch a film together, thought it might cheer you up chicken.
Mollys mum enters her bedroom and walks over to Molly, she pulls out her earphones and tickles Molly's chin. Molly does not stir. She shakes her a little but still no reaction. She notices the empty pill box on the floor and horror flashes to her face. She grabs Molly's shoulders and shakes vigorously, tears rolling down her face.
Mum
Molly, Molly, Wake up! Molly! Come on! You're fine, i know you're fine! Come on Molly!
Molly's mum finally lays her back down and collapses on top of her sobbing.
Mum
Molly, no, please
Mum
Molly, get up, it's half eleven you lazy buggar!
I've got us pizza for lunch, thought we could watch a film together, thought it might cheer you up chicken.
Mollys mum enters her bedroom and walks over to Molly, she pulls out her earphones and tickles Molly's chin. Molly does not stir. She shakes her a little but still no reaction. She notices the empty pill box on the floor and horror flashes to her face. She grabs Molly's shoulders and shakes vigorously, tears rolling down her face.
Mum
Molly, Molly, Wake up! Molly! Come on! You're fine, i know you're fine! Come on Molly!
Molly's mum finally lays her back down and collapses on top of her sobbing.
Mum
Molly, no, please
Saturday, 10 November 2012
Shot List - Scene 9 (Alfie's house)
- Establishing shot of Alfie laid on his sofa.
- Camera zooms in on Alfie as he picks his phone out of his pocket.
- Medium shot of Alfie as he sits up, dials a number and clears his throat ready to speak. *voice mail tone heard* - (dialogue exchanged) "Erm, hey Mol, its me again, Alfie. Obviously, ha. Where are you? I've been ringing you all day. I just wondered if you wanted to go out tonight and celebrate... us yknow. well call me back please, I'm getting worried. I love you. Bye."
- Camera zooms out as Alfie stands, looking confused he walks to the doorway, where Molly has left her bag behind.
- Close up as Alfie reaches down and picks the bag up.
- Medium shot of Alfie, he takes the bag over to the sofa, opens it and pulls out a letter.
- Close up on letter in Alfie's hand.
- Close up on Alfie unable to comprehend what the letter says.
- Medium close up as Alfie reaches for a spirit bottle.
- Close up on Alfie as he begins drinking heavily.
- Camera fades to a medium shot of Alfie sat crying on the floor, with an empty spirit bottle beside him and an empty one in his hand.
- Camera fades to a long shot of Alfie laid passed out on the floor, now surrounded by bottles, camera zooms in to a close up as Alfie begins to splutter and vomit, but due to being laid on his back Alfie begins to choke, unable to help himself Alfie suffocates and his drops to his side.
- Camera zooms in on Alfie as he picks his phone out of his pocket.
- Medium shot of Alfie as he sits up, dials a number and clears his throat ready to speak. *voice mail tone heard* - (dialogue exchanged) "Erm, hey Mol, its me again, Alfie. Obviously, ha. Where are you? I've been ringing you all day. I just wondered if you wanted to go out tonight and celebrate... us yknow. well call me back please, I'm getting worried. I love you. Bye."
- Camera zooms out as Alfie stands, looking confused he walks to the doorway, where Molly has left her bag behind.
- Close up as Alfie reaches down and picks the bag up.
- Medium shot of Alfie, he takes the bag over to the sofa, opens it and pulls out a letter.
- Close up on letter in Alfie's hand.
- Close up on Alfie unable to comprehend what the letter says.
- Medium close up as Alfie reaches for a spirit bottle.
- Close up on Alfie as he begins drinking heavily.
- Camera fades to a medium shot of Alfie sat crying on the floor, with an empty spirit bottle beside him and an empty one in his hand.
- Camera fades to a long shot of Alfie laid passed out on the floor, now surrounded by bottles, camera zooms in to a close up as Alfie begins to splutter and vomit, but due to being laid on his back Alfie begins to choke, unable to help himself Alfie suffocates and his drops to his side.
Script - Scene 9 (Alfie's House)
Alfie is laying on his sofa and pulls out his phone. He dails a number and sits up clearing his throat. There is no answer and the phone goes to automatic voicemail.
Alfie
Erm, hey Mol it's me again Alfie, obviously ha, where are you? I've been ringing you all day, wondered if you wanted to go out tonight celebrate us, you know, well call me back please, i'm getting worried now, love you, bye
Alfie puts down the phone and stands. Looking confused he walks to the doorway where he finds Molly's bad which she has left behind. He picks it up and sits with it on his knee. Pausing for a moment with consideration he empties the bag of items and finds a letter. He opens it to read chemo therapy results negative. Alfie can not comprehend the information and reaches for the spirit bottle drinking heavily. The scene fades to Alfie sat on the floor crying with an empty bottle beside him and an almost empty one in his hand. Fade again to Alfie asleep on the floor surrounded by empty bottles he splutters and vomits but he is laid on his back so begins to choke, he grasps his throat but unable to do anything he suffocates and his hand drops to the floor.
Alfie
Erm, hey Mol it's me again Alfie, obviously ha, where are you? I've been ringing you all day, wondered if you wanted to go out tonight celebrate us, you know, well call me back please, i'm getting worried now, love you, bye
Alfie puts down the phone and stands. Looking confused he walks to the doorway where he finds Molly's bad which she has left behind. He picks it up and sits with it on his knee. Pausing for a moment with consideration he empties the bag of items and finds a letter. He opens it to read chemo therapy results negative. Alfie can not comprehend the information and reaches for the spirit bottle drinking heavily. The scene fades to Alfie sat on the floor crying with an empty bottle beside him and an almost empty one in his hand. Fade again to Alfie asleep on the floor surrounded by empty bottles he splutters and vomits but he is laid on his back so begins to choke, he grasps his throat but unable to do anything he suffocates and his hand drops to the floor.
Friday, 9 November 2012
Shot List - Scene 8 (Molly's House)
- Establishing shot of Molly as she is laid asleep on her bed.
- Medium close up as camera zooms in on Molly as she wakes up due to coughing and notices some of her hair on the pillow next to her.
- Medium close up of Molly as she rubs her head and another chunk of hair falls out, Molly begins to break down in tears.
- Medium shot of Molly as she frantically rushes to find her phone.
- Close up on Molly's hand as she picks the phone up off the bedside table and dials a number.
- Medium shot of Molly as she sits on the phone - (dialogue exchanged) 'hello, its Molly. I'm erm, really sorry but I'm not well enough to work today so I'll not be coming in." - Molly's boss begins to shout down the phone. Molly replies ''Yes, I know, I'm sorry."
- Medium shot of Molly as she hangs up, throws the phone into the quilts and storms to go downstairs.
- Long shot of Molly as she walks from her room to the stairs, half way down she stops due to hearing her mum on the phone.
- Camera zooms into close up as Molly rests her head on the wall to listen.
- Camera cuts to medium shot of Molly's mum on the phone - (dialogue exchanged) "I know Pauline, I know. Thanks for being here to talk to, I'm really struggling at the moment. Its hard being positive all the time, but I have to be for Mol. I handed my notice in today, I just can't work in this state. I don't know what were going to do about the bills but me and Kevin will think of something. I feel bad for the other kids too, I feel like I'm not giving them enough attention but what can I do? I just wish all this would end. (Pause) yeah, yeah, you're right. Thanks again Pauline, I'm gonna dash to the shop now so I'll see you Sunday. Yeah, cya later lovey.
- Camera cuts back to a close up on a teary eyed Molly, as she watches her mum pick up her keys and leave the house.
- Low angle shot of Molly as she runs up the stairs crying.
- Close up on Molly as she grabs the pill bottle and pours them into her hand.
- Close up of Molly as one by one she swallows the pills.
- Medium shot as Molly lies back on her bed, puts her ear phones in, closes her eyes and begins to pass away.
- Medium close up as camera zooms in on Molly as she wakes up due to coughing and notices some of her hair on the pillow next to her.
- Medium close up of Molly as she rubs her head and another chunk of hair falls out, Molly begins to break down in tears.
- Medium shot of Molly as she frantically rushes to find her phone.
- Close up on Molly's hand as she picks the phone up off the bedside table and dials a number.
- Medium shot of Molly as she sits on the phone - (dialogue exchanged) 'hello, its Molly. I'm erm, really sorry but I'm not well enough to work today so I'll not be coming in." - Molly's boss begins to shout down the phone. Molly replies ''Yes, I know, I'm sorry."
- Medium shot of Molly as she hangs up, throws the phone into the quilts and storms to go downstairs.
- Long shot of Molly as she walks from her room to the stairs, half way down she stops due to hearing her mum on the phone.
- Camera zooms into close up as Molly rests her head on the wall to listen.
- Camera cuts to medium shot of Molly's mum on the phone - (dialogue exchanged) "I know Pauline, I know. Thanks for being here to talk to, I'm really struggling at the moment. Its hard being positive all the time, but I have to be for Mol. I handed my notice in today, I just can't work in this state. I don't know what were going to do about the bills but me and Kevin will think of something. I feel bad for the other kids too, I feel like I'm not giving them enough attention but what can I do? I just wish all this would end. (Pause) yeah, yeah, you're right. Thanks again Pauline, I'm gonna dash to the shop now so I'll see you Sunday. Yeah, cya later lovey.
- Camera cuts back to a close up on a teary eyed Molly, as she watches her mum pick up her keys and leave the house.
- Low angle shot of Molly as she runs up the stairs crying.
- Close up on Molly as she grabs the pill bottle and pours them into her hand.
- Close up of Molly as one by one she swallows the pills.
- Medium shot as Molly lies back on her bed, puts her ear phones in, closes her eyes and begins to pass away.
Script - Scene 8 (Molly's House)
Molly wakes up coughing. She sits up and notices hair on her pillow. She grabs her head and finds a clump of hair released in her hand and begins to sob. She reaches for her phone from the bedside table and dials a number.
Molly
Hello, it's Molly, i'm erm really sorry but i'm not well enough to work today so i'll not be coming in.
Boss
Right Molly, fine, if you miss any more shifts i'll have to let you go, you need to get your act together.
Molly
yes, i know, i'm sorry
Molly throws the phone amongst her quilts and pulls herself from the bed she staggers downstairs but stops half way hearing her mum on the phone. She sits on the step and rests her head against the wall and listens.
Mum
I know Pauline i know, thanks for being here to talk to i'm really struggling. It's hard being positive all the time but i have to be for Mol. I handed my notice in today, i just can't work in this state. I don't know what we're going to do about the bills but me and Kevin will think of something. I feel bad for the other kids too, i feel like i'm not giving them enough attention but what can i do? I just wish this would all end.
(pause)
Yeah, yeah, you're right. Thanks again Pauline, i'm gonna dash to the shop now so i'll see you Sunday, yeah, cya later lovey.
Mum picks up her keys and leaves the house. Molly runs upstairs sobbing, she grabs her pill bottle and empties them into her hand and takes them one by one with her glass of water. She then lays on her bed, puts her earphones in and closes her eyes to pass away.
Molly
Hello, it's Molly, i'm erm really sorry but i'm not well enough to work today so i'll not be coming in.
Boss
Right Molly, fine, if you miss any more shifts i'll have to let you go, you need to get your act together.
Molly
yes, i know, i'm sorry
Molly throws the phone amongst her quilts and pulls herself from the bed she staggers downstairs but stops half way hearing her mum on the phone. She sits on the step and rests her head against the wall and listens.
Mum
I know Pauline i know, thanks for being here to talk to i'm really struggling. It's hard being positive all the time but i have to be for Mol. I handed my notice in today, i just can't work in this state. I don't know what we're going to do about the bills but me and Kevin will think of something. I feel bad for the other kids too, i feel like i'm not giving them enough attention but what can i do? I just wish this would all end.
(pause)
Yeah, yeah, you're right. Thanks again Pauline, i'm gonna dash to the shop now so i'll see you Sunday, yeah, cya later lovey.
Mum picks up her keys and leaves the house. Molly runs upstairs sobbing, she grabs her pill bottle and empties them into her hand and takes them one by one with her glass of water. She then lays on her bed, puts her earphones in and closes her eyes to pass away.
Shot List - Scene 7 (Hospital)
This is the shot list for scene which is set outside the chemotherapy room in the hospital.
- Long shot of Molly sat outside the chemotherapy room
- Close up of her reactions as she waits in anxiety
- Medium shot of nurse calling Molly's name (dialogue exchanged) 'Molly Jones please'
- Medium shot of Molly (dialogue exchanged) 'Erm, yes, that's me'
- Over the shoulder medium shot of nurse (dialogue exchanged) 'Hello love, don't look so worried, everything will be fine, come on through
- Long shot of Molly getting up from the chair
- Medium long shot of Molly walking into the chemotherapy room
- Long shot of Molly sat outside the chemotherapy room
- Close up of her reactions as she waits in anxiety
- Medium shot of nurse calling Molly's name (dialogue exchanged) 'Molly Jones please'
- Medium shot of Molly (dialogue exchanged) 'Erm, yes, that's me'
- Over the shoulder medium shot of nurse (dialogue exchanged) 'Hello love, don't look so worried, everything will be fine, come on through
- Long shot of Molly getting up from the chair
- Medium long shot of Molly walking into the chemotherapy room
Script - Scene 7 (Hospital)
Molly is sat waiting outside the chemotherapy room, rubbing her hands together in anxiety and looking around.
Nurse
Molly Jones please
Molly
(Hesitantly) Erm, yes, that's me.
Nurse
Hello love, don't look so worried, everything will be fine, come on through
Nurse
Molly Jones please
Molly
(Hesitantly) Erm, yes, that's me.
Nurse
Hello love, don't look so worried, everything will be fine, come on through
Shot List - Scene 6 (Car)
This is the shot list for scene which is set in the hospital car park in the car.
- Establishing shot of the car in the car park
- Medium shot of Molly sat in the car (from Molly's mum's side of the car) (dialogue exchanged) 'Mum, I'm scared'
- Camera switches to medium shot of Molly's mum (from Molly's side of the car) (dialogue exchanged) 'Oh sweetheart don't be silly! We're going to get you fixed up and everything will be fine.'
- Camera switches back to medium shot of Molly (dialogue exchanged) 'Yeah mum but what if it's not, what if it doesn't work and I'm ugly and ill, I can't be both mum, I can't.'
- Camera switches back to medium shot of Molly's mum (dialogue exchanged) 'Shh, darling, you're going to be absolutely fine. You're beautiful and nothing will change that.'
- Long shot of car and Molly and her mum get out, camera pans round and follows them as they both enter the hospital entrance
- Establishing shot of the car in the car park
- Medium shot of Molly sat in the car (from Molly's mum's side of the car) (dialogue exchanged) 'Mum, I'm scared'
- Camera switches to medium shot of Molly's mum (from Molly's side of the car) (dialogue exchanged) 'Oh sweetheart don't be silly! We're going to get you fixed up and everything will be fine.'
- Camera switches back to medium shot of Molly (dialogue exchanged) 'Yeah mum but what if it's not, what if it doesn't work and I'm ugly and ill, I can't be both mum, I can't.'
- Camera switches back to medium shot of Molly's mum (dialogue exchanged) 'Shh, darling, you're going to be absolutely fine. You're beautiful and nothing will change that.'
- Long shot of car and Molly and her mum get out, camera pans round and follows them as they both enter the hospital entrance
Script - Scene 6 (Car)
Molly and her mum are sat in the car in the hospital car park
Molly
Mum, i'm scared.
Mum
Oh sweetheart, don't be silly! We're going to get you fixed up and everything will be fine.
Molly
Yeah mum but what if it's not, what if it doesn't work and I'm ugly and ill, I can't be both mum, I can't.
Mum
Shh, darling, you're going to be absolutely fine. You're beautiful and nothing will change that.
They both get out of the car and walk toward the hospital entrance
Molly
Mum, i'm scared.
Mum
Oh sweetheart, don't be silly! We're going to get you fixed up and everything will be fine.
Molly
Yeah mum but what if it's not, what if it doesn't work and I'm ugly and ill, I can't be both mum, I can't.
Mum
Shh, darling, you're going to be absolutely fine. You're beautiful and nothing will change that.
They both get out of the car and walk toward the hospital entrance
Shot List - Time Passing (Multiple Locations)
Shot list for time passing, this fades in from Molly and Alfie's first date by the lake.
Location - Visiting Art Opening.
Establishing shot of the two characters entering the art studio.
Over shoulder medium shot of Alfie (dialogue exchanged) - 'You look beautiful'
Over shoulder medium shot of Molly (dialogue exchanged) - 'Really?' Molly begins to blush.
Returned over shoulder medium shot of Aflie (dialogue exchanged) - 'Yes, and you should be told that every day'.
Camera zooms in as Alfie takes Molly's hand and they walk around the art studio, embracing the beauty of the instalations.
Location - Woodland area.
Long shot of the two characters stood facing one another in a woodland area covered in leaves.
Camera zooms in on Alfie as he tucks a stray piece of Molly's hair behind her ear, both characters grin.
Close up of Molly smiling (dialogue exchanged) - 'Why do you look at me like that?'
Returned Close up on Alfie (dialogue exchanged) - 'You're just,, Alfie takes a long pause, its just that.. he pauses, well you know'
Close up of Molly (dialogue exchanged) - 'I believe you'
Camera zooms out to a medium long shot of Molly as she pushes Alfie into the leaves, he grabs her hand and pulls her down with him so they are both on the floor in the leaves.
Camera fades into the next time passing scene of Molly and Alfie watching a sunrise.
Location - Watching a sunrise.
Establishing shot of the two characters facing a sunrise.
Camera zooms in on the two characters as Alfie turns and faces Molly.
Medium shot of Alfie (dialogue exchanged) - 'I love you Molly... I really do'
Medium shot of Molly, she looks surprised, smiles as she looks at the ground before answering (dialogue exchanged) 'I guess I love you two then'
Camera zooms back out on the silhouette of the couple as they stare into one another's eyes, with the sun rising in the background. This shot fades into the final time passing scene of Molly and Alfie leaving Molly's house.
Location - Outside Molly's House.
Establishing shot of the two characters as they step out of the door of Molly's house into the rain
Camera zooms into a close up on Molly (dialogue exchanged) - 'Oh its raining'
Close up on Alfie (dialogue exchanged) - 'Don't tell me you're scared of a little rain (pause) are you?'
Long shot of the two as Alfie grabs Molly's hand and pulls her into the rain, Molly squeals a little. (dialogue exchanged) - 'Omg it's freezing'
Camera zooms in to a medium shot as Alfie holds out his hand (dialogue exchanged) - 'Would the lady care to dance?'
Long shot of the two characters as Molly takes Alfie's hand and they dance in the rain together.
Camera fades into an establishing shot of Molly and her mum as they sit in the car in the hospital car park.
Location - Visiting Art Opening.
Establishing shot of the two characters entering the art studio.
Over shoulder medium shot of Alfie (dialogue exchanged) - 'You look beautiful'
Over shoulder medium shot of Molly (dialogue exchanged) - 'Really?' Molly begins to blush.
Returned over shoulder medium shot of Aflie (dialogue exchanged) - 'Yes, and you should be told that every day'.
Camera zooms in as Alfie takes Molly's hand and they walk around the art studio, embracing the beauty of the instalations.
Location - Woodland area.
Long shot of the two characters stood facing one another in a woodland area covered in leaves.
Camera zooms in on Alfie as he tucks a stray piece of Molly's hair behind her ear, both characters grin.
Close up of Molly smiling (dialogue exchanged) - 'Why do you look at me like that?'
Returned Close up on Alfie (dialogue exchanged) - 'You're just,, Alfie takes a long pause, its just that.. he pauses, well you know'
Close up of Molly (dialogue exchanged) - 'I believe you'
Camera zooms out to a medium long shot of Molly as she pushes Alfie into the leaves, he grabs her hand and pulls her down with him so they are both on the floor in the leaves.
Camera fades into the next time passing scene of Molly and Alfie watching a sunrise.
Location - Watching a sunrise.
Establishing shot of the two characters facing a sunrise.
Camera zooms in on the two characters as Alfie turns and faces Molly.
Medium shot of Alfie (dialogue exchanged) - 'I love you Molly... I really do'
Medium shot of Molly, she looks surprised, smiles as she looks at the ground before answering (dialogue exchanged) 'I guess I love you two then'
Camera zooms back out on the silhouette of the couple as they stare into one another's eyes, with the sun rising in the background. This shot fades into the final time passing scene of Molly and Alfie leaving Molly's house.
Location - Outside Molly's House.
Establishing shot of the two characters as they step out of the door of Molly's house into the rain
Camera zooms into a close up on Molly (dialogue exchanged) - 'Oh its raining'
Close up on Alfie (dialogue exchanged) - 'Don't tell me you're scared of a little rain (pause) are you?'
Long shot of the two as Alfie grabs Molly's hand and pulls her into the rain, Molly squeals a little. (dialogue exchanged) - 'Omg it's freezing'
Camera zooms in to a medium shot as Alfie holds out his hand (dialogue exchanged) - 'Would the lady care to dance?'
Long shot of the two characters as Molly takes Alfie's hand and they dance in the rain together.
Camera fades into an establishing shot of Molly and her mum as they sit in the car in the hospital car park.
Script - Time Passing (Multiple Locations)
Location - Having a Meal
Molly and Alfie sat at a candlelit table
Alfie
You look Beautiful
Molly
Really? (laughter)
Alfie
Yes, and you should be told that everyday
Location -Woodland Area
Alfie tucks Mollys hair behind her ear, both grinning.
Molly
(Laughter) Why do you look at me like that?
Alfie
You're just (long pause) it's just that (pause) you know
Molly
Yeah i'll believe you
Molly pushes alfie backwards in to a pile of leaves.
Location - Watching a Sunrise
After staying out all night which will be shown by several cuts containing no script Molly and Alfie are sat watching the sunrise, Alfie turns to Molly and stares at her for some time before speaking.
Alfie
I love you Molly... I really do
Molly looks shocked but smiles at the ground before answering.
Molly
I guess i love you too then
Location - Outside Molly's House
Molly and Alfie leave Molly's house and realise its raining, they pause and look at each other
Molly
Oh, it's raining
Alfie
Don't tell me you're scared of a little rain. (pause) come on
Alfie grabs Molly's hand and drags her in to the rain. Molly squels a little
Molly
Oh my god it's freezing
Ice cream van sounds in distance, Alfie holds out his hand
Alfie
would the lady care to dance?
Molly looks aprehensive but takes his hand and they dance in the rain.
Molly and Alfie sat at a candlelit table
Alfie
You look Beautiful
Molly
Really? (laughter)
Alfie
Yes, and you should be told that everyday
Location -Woodland Area
Alfie tucks Mollys hair behind her ear, both grinning.
Molly
(Laughter) Why do you look at me like that?
Alfie
You're just (long pause) it's just that (pause) you know
Molly
Yeah i'll believe you
Molly pushes alfie backwards in to a pile of leaves.
Location - Watching a Sunrise
After staying out all night which will be shown by several cuts containing no script Molly and Alfie are sat watching the sunrise, Alfie turns to Molly and stares at her for some time before speaking.
Alfie
I love you Molly... I really do
Molly looks shocked but smiles at the ground before answering.
Molly
I guess i love you too then
Location - Outside Molly's House
Molly and Alfie leave Molly's house and realise its raining, they pause and look at each other
Molly
Oh, it's raining
Alfie
Don't tell me you're scared of a little rain. (pause) come on
Alfie grabs Molly's hand and drags her in to the rain. Molly squels a little
Molly
Oh my god it's freezing
Ice cream van sounds in distance, Alfie holds out his hand
Alfie
would the lady care to dance?
Molly looks aprehensive but takes his hand and they dance in the rain.
Shot List - Scene 4 (The Lake/First Date)
Shot list for Scene 4, Molly and Alfie's first date by the lake.
- Establishing shot of a figure (Alfie) stood by the lake.
- Camera zooms in on Alfie as he starts to awkwardly wait to see if Molly will show up.
- Over shoulder long shot of Molly smiling as she walks towards Alfie in the distance.
- Over shoulder medium shot of Alfie (dialogue exchanged) - 'So glad you showed up, starting to think you'd bail.'
- Medium shot of Molly smiling (dialogue exchanged) - 'I wouldn't do that to you'
- Medium shot of Alfie smirking and laughing (dialogue exchanged) - 'Lucky me'
- Long shot of the two characters stood side by side facing the lake, camera zooms in on the two as Alfie awkwardly reaches for Molly's hand.
- Medium long shot of the two characters as they hold hands and smile.
Camera fades out of the shot to begin time passing/multiple shots of the couple spending time together and begin to fall in love.
- Establishing shot of a figure (Alfie) stood by the lake.
- Camera zooms in on Alfie as he starts to awkwardly wait to see if Molly will show up.
- Over shoulder long shot of Molly smiling as she walks towards Alfie in the distance.
- Over shoulder medium shot of Alfie (dialogue exchanged) - 'So glad you showed up, starting to think you'd bail.'
- Medium shot of Molly smiling (dialogue exchanged) - 'I wouldn't do that to you'
- Medium shot of Alfie smirking and laughing (dialogue exchanged) - 'Lucky me'
- Long shot of the two characters stood side by side facing the lake, camera zooms in on the two as Alfie awkwardly reaches for Molly's hand.
- Medium long shot of the two characters as they hold hands and smile.
Camera fades out of the shot to begin time passing/multiple shots of the couple spending time together and begin to fall in love.
Script - Scene 4 (The Lake/First Date)
Its 6'o clock Alfie stands waiting by the lake to see if Molly will turn up, has he made the right decision?, what will she see in him? After everything they both have been through its time they found each other. In the distance Alfie see's Molly walking towards him with a smile on her face.
Alfie
So glad you showed up, starting to think you'd bail.
Molly
(Smiling) I wouldn't do that to you.
Alfie
(Smirks and Laughs) Lucky me
They both turn and smile at each-other, Alfie awkwardly grabs Molly's hand as they stand by the lake.
Alfie
So glad you showed up, starting to think you'd bail.
Molly
(Smiling) I wouldn't do that to you.
Alfie
(Smirks and Laughs) Lucky me
They both turn and smile at each-other, Alfie awkwardly grabs Molly's hand as they stand by the lake.
Storyboard - Scene 3 (Alfie's House)
This is the Story Board for Scene 3 in Alfie's house. Some problems we face in this scene would be the smoking on the toilet scene as smoking is not permitted in any of our groups homes. This scene will need modification.
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