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Thursday, 20 September 2012

Film Idea/Proposal

When Olly was a young boy, he lived next door to a girl the same age as him, Amanda. The two became childhood friends from a young age and were almost like best friends. One day however, a 13 year old Olly discovers that Amanda is leaving town with her parents as her father has a new job elsewhere. Olly finds this quite hard to accept as Amanda is his best friend and the two have known each other for so long. However, as Olly tries to adapt to a life without his best friend, he realises that he actually had a growing crush on her.

As the weeks pass and turn to months and the months turn to years, fast forward to the present day and a 20 year old Olly is living the high life; he has a well paid job, amazing friends and has just moved in to his brand new flat. One day however, a blast from the past turns up and Amanda appears at his door asking to see her friend who lives with Olly. Unknown that this girl is actually his childhood friend, he invites her inside where she explains to Olly a bit about her friend. After talking for a while, the two begin talking about their backgrounds and their childhood, where they both discover they had a best friend of the opposite sex called Olly and Amanda. The two cannot believe that they've bumped in to each other after all this time and agree to go for a coffee one day. They soon swap numbers and low and behold, Olly finds that he once again is becoming attracted to Amanda just like he was all those years ago. As the couple begin to hang out together, their relationship grows and Amanda too, finds that she is falling in love with Olly. 

As the couple finally begin to realise their feelings for each other, Amanda is involved in a car accident and is rushed to hospital. Olly goes and visits her where the doctors explain that Amanda is making a speedy recovery which everyone is relieved to hear. However, suddenly out of the blue Amanda passes away and Olly is left truly heartbroken at the fact he has lost his childhood friend/the love of his life. But what makes it even more heartbreaking is that when Olly thought he had lost Amanda the first time when they were children, he has lost her a second and final time and he knows that she won't ever appear in his life ever again. 

Film Idea/Proposal

After growing up together and falling in love, Daisy and Jack begin to be ripped apart, after Jack's prolonged decision to leave his home town and to join the army.  In hope to make a better life for the two of them and to do something with his life, Jack believed this decision would make Daisy proud, he was wrong.

Daisy's world comes crashing down around her when Jack informs her of his decision to enrol in the armed forces, the boy who she has grown up to love, is being taken away from her and there's nothing she can do to change his mind. This is the catalyst that will ultimately reveal if the two are 'meant to be'.

Jacks departure leaves Daisy devastated, being alone in there home drives her crazy and being unable to see the one she loves becomes a constant battle that she has to face. Tormented by the thought of Jack being killed, Daisy begins to imagine a fantasy life where the two can be together, shutting the outside world away, Daisy focuses all her attention on a life she had made up, one where Jack never joined the armed forces and where they can stay together forever.

A year has passed, and Jack finally returns home for first time, confused by there run down home, Jack struggles to understand what has happened. Daisy is a changed woman, he cannot understand why she no longer recognises him and it soon becomes apparent that she has trapped herself in a fantasy world, where he no longer belongs. She refuses to believe that Jack is the one she loves and as time progresses she does everything in her power to shut him out of her life.

Jack returns to the army, leaving Daisy behind, the girl he loves no longer loves him any more.

Film Idea/Proposal

This is my idea for our short film. The inspiration for the story was the characters who reflect people i know in real life. When the other people in my group propose their ideas we can begin to select our favourite.

Wednesday, 19 September 2012

Our chosen production name

As a group, we have decided that our production name will be 'Heartstrings Productions'. We have decided on this name as the genre of our film will be romantic/drama and we are hoping that our film will be able to 'tug on people's heartstrings' with it mainly being a romantic film. We also considered using 'Heartbreak Productions' as our production name but felt using this name would make it sound slightly depressing and also the word 'heartbreak' is often associated with break ups, which we had already decided would not be an issue within our film.

What must a short film entail?


A short film of course does not have a long run time, so in order for it to be successful, the plot needs to be quick , as well as being effective. Ten minutes is the normal duration of a short film; this gives enough time to tell a good story and hold the audience's attention, without them getting bored.
The theme is crucial, if you look at short films that have won prizes in the past, they all are of a theme that everyone can relate to. So it wouldn't be much good making a film based on someone having a pet cat, as not everyone is a fan of cats. This would perhaps be successful if it were a full length film, but as you only have up to ten minutes to show, it isn't going to pull on anyone's heart strings.
The characters are very important. After all, they are the ones that are going to be transferring your story to your viewers. It isn't a very good idea to introduce a lot of characters to the viewers as there is too little time to get to know them all. Up to 4 is recommended.
The central character must be driven through the story by either:

  • A want
  • A need
  • An obligation
In our case, the main character is driven by a want - the want to recover from her illness and the want to be adored by someone. 






Tuesday, 18 September 2012

What makes a short film?

A short film is usually around 40 minutes long or less. There are no specific rules on what a short film must include, however these certain things may make a short film a bit different and stand out from the rest. These include an exciting and original idea, a strong script, good acting, a strong beginning and a twist at the end, as well as other things.

Short films can be professional or amateur productions. They are often screened at local, national or international film festivals and are often made by independent filmmakers for non profit, either with a low budget, big budget (which is very rare) or no budget. Short films are usually funded by film grants, non profit organisations, sponsor, or out of pocket funds. These films are used by indie filmmakers to prove their talent in order to gain funding for future films from private investors, entertainment companies or film studios. Short films do qualify for Academy Awards if screened in Los Angeles.

What makes a good short film?

I looked on several film sites as to what the factors are in making a good short film. I found these four useful tips on http://www.bbc.co.uk/filmnetwork/filmmaking/guide/introduction/what-makes-a-good-short
I think it is important to have an original and interesting idea and i found this tip useful as it advises me to look at recent newspapers and stories for inspiration.
When referring to the 'make it short' point our brief is to make a film no longer then 5 minutes from start to finish. The last point 'strong beginning' is something i hadn't thought about but now seems really clear that when writing the script for our film we need to catch our audiences attention straight way.

Monday, 17 September 2012

Sub Genre Research

These are the sub-genre's of the Drama category of films. Our film could fit in to several of these sub topics. Firstly addiction or alcohol due to the nature of the male character, it could also be a chick flick or romantic drama due to the underlying love story. As the story develops the characters face difficult decisions which affect their future, this could be considered as the come-of-age genre. Both characters are under 20 it could also be included in the 'teen film' genre. And finally due to the female characters cancer it could also be included in the disease and disability category.

Research Into Genre

The genre we have chosen for our film is drama. As I have been researching further into this genre, I came across a more particular sort of drama - Tragedy. I think this is the perfect way to describe our planned storyline.
I have found out that 'tragedy' is a sad thing. In theatre, a tragedy is a play that ends sadly. A tragedy is usually about a person who has many good qualities, but has one bad quality (called a "tragic flaw") that causes trouble for him, and may cause him, or his family or friends, to be in trouble.

Often in a tragedy, there is one thing that the hero does not want to happen (in our story, it is the girl suffering from Leukhemia not wanting her illness to take over her life, and the boy not wanting his alcohol problem wanting to take over his life) and tries to prevent, but no matter what he/she does, it makes this thing more and more sure to happen. They originated in Ancient Greece where they were performed at religious festivals.  Other famous writers include Shakespeare.
Some examples of Shakespearian tragedies include:
Titus Andronicus
Romeo and Juliet
Julius Caesar
Hamlet
 Troilus and Cressida (was listed as a tragedy, but is now sometimes regarded as a dark comedy.)
Othello
Timon of Athens
King Lear
Macbeth
 Antony and Cleopatra
 Coriolanus

Research Into Genre

Our film falls into the drama/reality category, which involves realistic characters and situations. The main themes that this particular genre of film relate to include alcoholism, drug addiction, sexuality, corruption, illness/sick health, religious prejudice and class divisions. There are many sub genre's of drama films for example, romance films, periodic films, crime films and tragedy films are all related to the drama/reality category. Many of these films are based around real life events and situations, therefore have a huge impact on the audience as they can relate to what is happening in the production. As a result drama productions generate a sense of emotion that necessarily isn't as easy to relate to as in such genre of film as fantasy or horror.

Drama's usually concentrate mainly on a character or characters at a crucial moment in their lives, whether they are facing conflict with the outside world or a battle within. Many Dramatic films end in tragedy or heartbreak, this can be due to the events that unfold within the film or due to that in real life not everything has a happy ending, therefore dramatic productions generate a feeling of sorrow to ensure they relate to the real world.

Examples of Dramatic/tragedy's, that are based on real life events include:

- My Sister's Keeper - 2009 -
Storyline: The main character Anna, looks to earn medical emancipation from her parents, who have relied upon her and her body parts to keep their leukaemia-stricken daughter, Kate alive.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HP4NxUFgFrs








- Philadelphia - 1993 -
Storyline:When Andrew Beckett a lawyer, with Aids gets fired by a conservative law firm due to his condition, he hires a homophobic small time lawyer to defend his case. Ironically they become friends, but tragically due to his illness Andrew dies, leaving his friend heartbroken and determined to win his case.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cl4B9AU45P4




- Pure - 2002 -
Storyline: A young boy trying to deal with his mothers heroin addiction, befriends a waitress who helps him through the tough situation.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bXilzb4wJlc




- Dear John - 2010 -
Storyline: A young solider falls for a young girl, when he is home for the summer on leave, after spending the summer together, being separated when he has to go back in the army, takes it toll on the couple and there relationship.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NLkTKkNXDp4




Research Into Genre

We have decided that our film will be a drama film as we all very much enjoy drama films and feel that we will be able to create a successful, effective drama film. It also slightly falls into the romantic drama category as it focuses on a male and female character who fall in love, however the story ends as a tragedy.

Drama films tend to be serious presentations or stories with settings or life situations which portray realistic characters in conflict with either themselves or forces of nature and who are dealing with emotional themes. A dramatic film shows human beings at their best, their worst and everything in between. Drama films are probably the largest film genre because they include a broad spectrum of films such as romantic dramas, sport films, period dramas, comedy dramas, courtroom dramas and crime.

Dramatic films tend to include themes such as infidelity, racial prejudice, religious intolerance, drug addiction, poverty, political unrest, alcoholism, sexuality, mental illness, violence against women and many others. Dramatic films which have used some of these subjects have successfully drawn attention to the issues by taking advantage of the topical interest of the subject. Dramas tend to have tragic or painful resolutions and concern the survival of some tragic crisis, like the death of a family member or a divorce.

Romantic drama explores the complex side of love. The plot usually revolves around an obstacle which prevents love between two people. Music is often employed to indicate the emotional mood, creating an atmosphere of greater insulation for the couple. The conclusion of a romantic drama typically does not indicate whether a marriage will occur. Some examples of romantic drama films are Letters To Juliet (2010), A Walk To Remember (2002), The Notebook (2004) and Romeo and Juliet.



 


Letters To Juliet trailer (2010) - A girl named Sophie dreams of becoming a writer and travels to Verona, Italy where she meets the "Secretaries of Juliet".












   A Walk To Remember trailer (2002) - The story of  
   two North Carolina teens, Landon Carter and Jamie
   Sullivan, who are thrown together after Landon gets
   into trouble and is made to do community service.













The Notebook trailer (2004) - A poor and passionate young man falls in love with a rich young woman and gives her a sense of freedom. They soon are separated by their social differences.














Romeo and Juliet trailer (1996) - Shakespeare's famous play updated to the hip modern suburb of Verona and still retaining its original dialogue.

Sunday, 16 September 2012

Short Film Analysis

In analysing a short film, I decided to analyse a 10 minute long, short production called 'Mud Boy'. In the film, a young girl, Mina, is watching her mum and step dad have an argument, with her step dad being abusive towards her mum. Upset by what is happening, she runs out in to the garden where she makes a chilling discovery at the bottom of her garden - she discovers her younger brother buried under the soil. Believing he is still alive, she cleans him up and invites him inside, just as the police come and ask Mina where her mum is as she is worried due to the fact she has not seen her son in days. Mina invites the police officer to come outside with her and shows her where her brother is, when in actual fact it is just her imagination and her brother is actually dead under the soil as her step dad has murdered him.
Cinematography, editing, mise-en-scene and sound are all used effectively throughout this production to highlight the key themes of abuse and murder. There is also a sense of mystery and confusion throughout the film and all of these aspects express these themes clearly to the audience.



As the production begins, an establishing shot of the house in which Mina, her mum and her step dad live inis shown, showing the setting of where the film takes place.




 A close up is used after the establishing shot showing Mina watching her mum and step dad arguing. In this shot, we can see a faint blur of Mina's mum on the right and it seems as though Mina is looking up at her mum, showing her from a high angle. This reflects her status as a young child and she is surrounded by people who are in control.





 An over the shoulder shot/shot reverse shot is used on Mina's step dad and her mum arguing. It shows the couple having an angry argument with each other and shows Mina's step dad's angry expression and her mum's terrified expression, further highlighting one of the key themes of abuse.




 A point of view shot is used when Mina runs out in to the garden, giving the effect that someone is chasing her, possibly her step dad as she, and her mum, are in fear of him.




 A long shot is used of Mina playing in the soil. As we are able to see the leaves around the camera, this gives the impression that someone is hiding in the bushes and watching her, creating a sense of mystery.




  A high angle shot is used and points directly down on Mina and what she has discovered - her brother. The use of the high angle shot shows to the audience Mina's brother from head to toe.



An extreme close up is used of the door handle as Mina goes inside the house. The door handle is seen moving up and down as though someone is stuck inside and cannot get out, suddenly creating a frightening feel.



Medium shot of Mina's brother, showing how dirty he is due to being under the soil for so long and showing his reaction as he looks at the house and realises the man who murdered him is inside.



 A slightly low angle shot is used of Mina and the police officer, showing Mina smaller than the police officer. This shows that the police officer has more power and status than Mina.



 The shot is then tilted down slightly as the police officer kneels down next to Mina, forming a medium shot. As the camera tilts down as the police officer kneels, this shows that the police officer has stepped down from her previous action of being stood up and seen as a figure of authority to now the same level as Mina as she talks to her politely.



 A long shot is used of the piece of land where Mina found her brother and shows he has disappeared, further highlighting the sense of mystery which runs throughout the film.




An eyeline match is then used as the police officer looks on at what she has seen. From her expression, she looks startled and the audience are then left wondering what exactly she has seen.



Eyeline match used of Mina's brother laid in the soil, showing to the audience what the police officer saw and
that Mina was clearly imagining seeing her brother alive.



A long is then used of Mina's brother sat on top of the shed, to trick the audience in to thinking that Mina's brother is alive, however another shot is used on Mina looking at him which then proves that he isn't, as Mina is imagining it.


The use of editing is very effective in this film. There is the continuous use of cuts throughout in order for the audience to follow the narrative. There is also the use of very sharp cuts as Mina is washing her hands in the sink, showing the process from her hands being dirty to becoming clean.

The use of mise-en-scene is very effective in this film. For example there is the use of props such as Mina's toys and the spade, which act as tools of escapism for Mina as she tries to get away from reality and goes in to her own world, which is the garden. Also the way in which the little boy is dressed and covered in mud outlines the fact that he has been underground for quite some time and this is also shown with the use of pale make up on his face and dark make up around his eyes, portraying him as sort of like 'the living dead'. Also, the police officer dressed in her uniform shows that she is an authoritative figure and a person of importance.

The use of non-diagetic sound, such as the music, is used extremely effectively throughout this film. At the beginning of the film, the music starts off as sounding slow, dark and has a serious tone to it, highlighting the key themes of abuse, murder, confusion and mystery. However when Mina finds her brother's hand moving under the soil, the music changes to reflect the movement of his hand and becomes high pitched and tingly. As Mina walks in to the house, the slow, dark, serious music returns that was played at the beginning, highlighting the fact that danger is possibly near due to Mina's step dad being in the next room. As Mina's step dad gets arrested, the music changes to sounding slightly more relieved as he is being taken away and Mina and her mum can now live happily without being in fear of him.


http://www.bbc.co.uk/filmnetwork/films/p009d657

Short Film Analysis

Screened on BBC HD as part of BBC HD Film Shorts, this particular short film 'In Passing' uses a range of Camera angles/ Cinematography, Editing, Mise-en scene and Sound, to portray the key themes of love, loss and to express the dramatic nature of this short production. Set in war time London, this production uses an Establishing shot to set the scene of the film, of a uniformed man, typing a letter on a typewriter, this not only gives us an idea of when the production is set, but also imply's that this letter has significance in the production, as a man, of what appears to be importance, due to the uniform he is wearing, is taking the time to type it.


The shot then cuts to a Close Up on a door, with  a letter being posted through, this suggests that the letter that the man was writing in the previous shot, is now in the possession of someone else.


A Medium Shot is used on the main dominant character Fay Travers, a mother, with both her husband and son at war, when she picks the letter up.  This shot gives us a detailed view on her reaction to the letter, and we can see the dread that fills her face, as she realises her world is about to be turned upside down, due to the contents within.


A Extreme long shot is used on the character Fay Travers, as she puts the letter down in between the two empty chairs, that usually her son and husband sit in as she sits alone, unable to open the letter and bravely carrying on with her daily routine. 


A long shot is also used to re-establish the scene of a crowded air raid shelter, as everyone tries to get comfortable for the night ahead, this expresses the little space everyone had and shows the harsh conditions of war time London.


Over shoulder, Medium shots are used, to show the exchange of conversation between Fay and her son Henry, as she asks him all about the war, and he reassures her that 'everything will be alright'. This dialogue has a sense of irony as everything isn't alright and we later discover that he has been killed in the war.


Close up is used to express the key theme of love and loss for example when she hugs Henry for the last time, she hugs him tightly and we can see that she doesn't want to let him go, even though she has to.


One of the final shots used in this production, is that of a Long shot of Fay finally reading the letter, accepting what has happened and coming to terms with the loss of her son.



Edit is a key aspect used in this short film, Cuts are used throughout to join the pieces of edit together continuously and  for example fade in/ fade out is used to show a change in a passage of time and to show Fay fading into 'dream land', where she see's Henry for the last time and says her final goodbye to him.

Medium shot of Fay as she falls to sleep and fades into 'dream land'
Mise - en scene is also a key feature used to portray the theme's of  love and loss in this production, for instance, Dim Lighting is used to represent Fay being kept in the dark about the contents of the letter, she fears opening the letter and begins to convince herself that by not opening in she can carry on with her life, rather than facing the truth which is in fact the loss of her son.

In contrast to this, Bright Lighting is used to represent Henry and his friend George walking into the light, passing on and expresses that they have both been killed in the war. 

Long shot of two male characters as they walk into the light
The acting used in this production, shows the emotion and love the characters have for one another, for example Fay finds it so hard to let go of her son and accept the loss of him due to her for him love being so strong, similar to this Henry finds it so hard to say goodbye because he doesn't want to leave his mum, but he has no other choice.
Medium shot of Fay and her son as they say there final goodbye to one another

The sound uses throughout this production, is both diagetic and non diagetic, both the main characters speech is spoken softly with a sense of remorse, this sets the tone of the film as when you love someone your kind to them and speak with emotion. Also within this production a key speech referred to is that of the one used in this film Peter Pan, Tinker-bell says ''You know that place between sleep and awake, the place where you can still remember dreaming, that's where ill always love you, Peter Pan'', This is used as a metaphor for Fay and Henry as she she's him in the place between sleep and awake and will always love him, despite him being killed.
The non diagetic sound used in this production includes air raid sirens which set the tone of the film being in war time London, but in contrast and a soft music plays, which makes you feel remorse and sad as it relates to the people killed. 

The title sequence of this production, is that of a simple one, it follows the footsteps of an army officer walking to the room in which Henry's commanding officer is writing a letter to his mother, also fade in/out are used to fade between the footsteps and to plain white text of the titles. Along with this, the music of the title sequence is that of a soft violin playing and the sound of the typewriter keys being pressed as the CO writes his letter of condolence. 

Close up of the Officers footsteps walking
Title of the production

Short Film Analysis

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1onP8VnfUb9bjm_Thsrr5Rf9T6T06kAL6golYMAeqKrA/edit

Tuesday, 11 September 2012

Short Film Analysis


Unfortunately i am unable to embed the video as i viewed it on http://www.bbc.co.uk/filmnetwork/ and each film is available for a limited time before being taken down.

Monday, 10 September 2012

Research Into Short Films

Short films are considered to be an original motion picture that has a running time of 40 minutes or less, including credits, these can be professional or amateur productions. They are usually screened at film festivals, and are often made by independent film makers for no profit, with a low budget and in many cases no budget at all.
The BBC film network,  in association with BBC Films are an example of a company that showcases over 300 of these short films, they promote the UK film industry and provide a selection of classic shorts.
Link to BBC film network site: http://www.bbc.co.uk/filmnetwork/

Film 4 also showcases a range of these short films online, 'They may be small, but they're perfectly formed and prove size isn't everything' is a key motto that Film4 Shorts uses to promote these short productions.
Link to the Film4 Shorts website: http://www.film4.com/minisite/short-films